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Queen of Hearts Had Some Tarts by ~mournfullmonk:iconmournfullmonk:





three swift hacks,
and off with his head.
He be dead. rand better to be he?
He be dead. rand better to be he?
i saw the stick and the stick saw me.

and the dead head(less) man was 4\'11\"

small little runt, grew up on unleaven.

better be he now dead rand to see?
I saw the corpse and the corpse saw me.
He be dead corpse drink tea with me.
He be dead corpse drink tea with me.
with or without the stary-eyed boy (now corpse)

So off with \'is head!
off with \'is head!
and if you be too weak to make he be dead

then i\'ll find another unweak slith-sneak

who will slith(er) to the house of the star-eyed boy
and spill his blood before a cry

reward to one who makes he be dead!
Now off! off! off with his head!
©2003-2009 ~mournfullmonk
:iconmournfullmonk:

Author's Comments

erm, yesh... i wrote this after JoJo convinced me to read Alice in Wonderland again....

so yeah... i like it... a lot....

and the picture was some random thing that i found on the 'net... i shouldn't get any credit for it.

massive amounts of periods.........*nods*


oh, and btw, when you're reading this outloud... the sections in brackets are NOT voiced... they stay silentl, unspoken, unheard.

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:iconekskwizet:
I like this, the rhyming scheme is fun, and the style quite clever.
:icontabbsux:
very very nice! i like the flow. very creative. very clever use of words and brackets. I enjoy(ed) reading your work. hehehe! it is really cool. But i promise not to take your idea of using them. Seeing as i have yet to do so that is. i dont know if you are the first person to use them or not but it is a great imaginative way to get the point across. just make sure to stay out of rabbit holes and stay out of the looking glass.;-) (Wink) good job!

--
You can dream of fame.
You can wish for fortune.
But you have to live reality.


~That Alex Kid
Part Of
[link]
:icondoberuman:
it's a nifty style and a bit of a departure for you, but it's rhythm is great and it makes a person think...hurrah!

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the adoration continues for:

:iconmournfullmonk::iconcrypto rchid::icony2jenn::iconenjeru: :iconlostgirl:
:iconragingsloth:
It makes me feel warm and fuzzy, we must apply it to a song in T.T.H.O.F.. fo sho, fo sho.
:iconwonkykitten:
why do i always miss the deviations that i inspire you to create??? man oh man. i fail. but at least i'm attempting to go through my seven hundred deviation watchlist today! AHAHAH.

and of course this title caught my eye and i enjoy this almost as much as your ridiculous faerie poem from ages ago. anyhoo. i'm glad you enjoyed rereading 'alice' and i really do enjoy this poem for its originality and gross tea macabre feel that matches the rhyme. and oo good inernet hunting for the thumbnail image.

i really do like your words. i think i shall copy this into my pursejournal when i get back to brandeisland where i have better printing machinery. oh you rock my rainbowshroomy socks you do!

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:psychotic: + :kitty: = wonkykitten >> jojo
:iconmournfullmonk:
awww, thankies my dreaded faewench friend! :hug:

yeah, since you convinced me to reread it, i finished it in a day, and the next day i read Through teh Looking Glass ;P

and thankies for your kind words on my works.:heart: i feel only the utmost amount of honour at being admitted to the gallery of the Jojo Lazar Purse Journal Exhibit! :giggle:

i would dance again. your comments make me dance everso oft.

--
Møµrñfû[[ m¤ñk

:iconpowerpuff-girls:
:iconvivalapunk123:
my favorite book of all time...and thats saying something. :+fav:

--
Come and get one in the yarbles, if you have any yarbles!"
I'll be hiding in your dirty room
I'll go there seeking only what I need
La-ti-da we’ll stay there till we bleed
It's for sure
Let me keep you in this place
You’ll be better off this way

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